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With friendship there comes
Trust and expectancies
That someone will pick up when you call
That someone will catch you
When you begin to fall

A trust that is built
Iron clad and unwavering
None of your secrets loose
No matter the quavering

But someday, somehow,
The dam lets loose,
The secrets flow
The call is never picked up
And you only continue to fall

Are all friendships doomed to this?
Or is it something hidden by a deep dark wish?
A deep down want,
A sabotage against oneself?
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Something I wrote at the end of the summer.

The last two lines were added recently.
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:hug: very deep view on friendship and betrayal or at least that's how I see it

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I was nauseous and tingly all over. I was either in love or I had smallpox.

Those who dance are called insane by those who can't hear the music.
you should name it though :[
Thank you. I have no clue what to name it. Everything that I thought of didn't really seem to fit, so I decided to just leave it as Untitled instead of choosing something cheesy.

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Dr. Wilson: Is there a light somewhere that goes on when I have food?

House: Green for food, orange for beverages, red for impure thoughts. That bulb burns out every two weeks.
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Thank you for the comment.

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Dr. Wilson: Is there a light somewhere that goes on when I have food?

House: Green for food, orange for beverages, red for impure thoughts. That bulb burns out every two weeks.

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